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A perfect world?
Couldn't we just talk
Can I talk to my friend about something I want to change
We could think of new ways together
So they do
They join forces
All is going well until they have an argument
They fight
Endlessly
They hurt and kill many people
Just to try to prove something
In the end they look and see what they have really done
Killed
Their dreams of a perfect world shatter
They have killed their friends and families
For nothing
Couldn't we just talk
Can I talk to my friend about something I want to change
We could think of new ways together
So they do
They join forces
All is going well until they have an argument
They fight
Endlessly
They hurt and kill many people
Just to try to prove something
In the end they look and see what they have really done
Killed
Their dreams of a perfect world shatter
They have killed their friends and families
For nothing
This was a request from The-Anariarch. I hope you like it.
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This is actually quite a wonderful thought! I don't know what your exposure to poetry is but if you improve your expressions and flow of thought, this work can be amazing! The fact that you set out to change the world and bring peace and you end up being what you were trying to destroy. If you want, I can write my version of this with the credits to you of course 